Wow! Great lyrics and a great tune too. I liked it very much. Being a newbee I really can't say much more. Just liked the whole song. Good work.

I can't write a thing..... The worst song written is better than my ability. This sounds very discouraging. I don't remember where I read it, but s...

I do realize that the verse starting "the people I'm passing" doesn't have the same rhyme scheme as the others. I'm debating wether to leave it as is ...

You speak more than a little English. That was good. Although, it's "feel" not "fill". Maybe your English is off in some pats, but I can't really tell...

Some nice lyrics here gosha.I particularly like Now, that you're gone, I realize How much I miss your hazel eyes With this section though;Now, that ...

I'm sorry guys for the late reply . I didn't have Internet for a couple of days.Thank you all for the suggestions. I'll work on the song and post agai...