Gotta agree with the others that it took a while to get what it's about. When I read makes her wanna be a man, I thought, oh, a mistake, it's gotta be...

You're right... It should be about some couple all in love (boring subject huh), so I guess I'll change this partLet me hold you Taste your lips Come ...

I think its good too! I got out my guitar to try the chords played the way you described it and it obviously is a 3/4. Even only for that you're getti...

I'm gonna try that one too Chris. You don't wanna know how frustrated I was yesterday night because I couldn't work it out ;) Thanx![edit] Is my avata...

I don't know wether you all listen to newer music or not, but I came across something rather funny IMOI bought Bon Jovis new album and when listening ...

Great lyrics! Also, your recording of it sound good. Only comment on that is that I can't hear the singing very well. Good job!

Good entry, I like the subject you choose. Guess pbee is right though, some things probably won't flow nicely when you try to sing them. Feel free to ...

Great new forum! (even though I'm spending too much time here already :P)

Thanx for your comments all :)I'm at school now, but I'll try that drum machine ASAP.And as for submitting only a voice recording... I feel like I can...

I'm gonna critise myself :P a) the way I pronounce "and"b) grammar... where they have come from or where they had come from? (gotta hate all those te...

You're right geoo, it's not easy, I'm finding it tougher than I expected it to be... Removed two sets of lyrics already... Can't think of something go...

Blue skies, might as well be grey,That's the colour the world looks to me today,There ain't no colours if you got no love.... The world looks grey, ...

heh, you had me... I didn't recognise it as being someone's song already(hey, I'm only 19, I'm sure this is something way before my time, even though ...