i agree with gmilam... some sort of variance could definately improve it, both with the structure and the rhyme scheme..chorus? bridge? interlude? tra...

"Prease to pless button before derivering your massage and bend down." -lol

cheap's got the right idea.so far you have the general, summarization. you're saying "this is how i feel". well don't say it, show it. show us how you...

Hey Lara.. So you want to start a band. Awesome. But... you're not too sure about your guitar playing. Well there are two possible remedies... Either ...