I'm already havin a bash at re-writin the lyrics, but thanks. To be honest its the music what really makes the song, thats what i wrote first and tho...

I kno this shows my ignorance but where in the world is Newfoundland :D

Im really liking this song mate, what are you inspirations for it ?

Cheers 4 readin it. Yeh my english is pretty crap, im from leeds. i will ave a bash at re-writin it but thanks 4 the feed back