i either must be stupid cause i didnt fllow a word you said or we just must not be seeing the backround of the song the same.It was about me and my p...

where did i contradict myself?

yeah it was a knife.Not really about a loved one dying but close enough.

What would you suggest doing to the first two verses?

cool well now that its all fixed up.how does someone go about copyrighting something?

come on what about john lennon or paul mcartney?Robert plant.Rober Smith!!!!!

thanks,what about: And then yours took hold of mine. So we stood there in the rain, ...