I was thinking of this one to be more of an up-tempo rocker, but not set on that. While my other ones posted so far, would be more mellow (possibly fi...

Your suggestions are right on target. Here are some changes that I came up with for some of the lines.Revision:She was hard as a tack and cold as a fl...

Thanks for the suggestions! I do like lyrics that are a little cryptic, or at least could be thought of in different ways. So, I guess I was trying t...

I really appreciate all the suggestions! I'm still thinking about taking out the "pearls" line. While I get that it doesn't have to do with school, i...