I know lyrics are harder to judge by just reading but I've been having a hard time with my music software stuff so I haven't been able to post any of my songs with the music and what not. I know they seem like poems but they're songs.
MARIE
Stop straining so much
Keep your eyelids shut
Love has found you through
That warm grasp of your blanket
And the soft touch of my heart
It loves you
It loves you
Sometimes we all just need it to
I'll you watch from the sunlight
And strongly behind the window blinds
Nothing will hurt you
As long as I am close to your bedside
Caring for you like when you were mine
When you were mine
My baby
My baby
I THINK I KNOW
I think I know now why you're so depressed
But I'm not a picture you need to relive
Some quiet kid sitting in an open space
A sound I grew up in
Though you should know I'm feeling better now
No more bullet sounds they are over now
And I never was what your heart was begging for
More of a short term solution until you found your true love
I never was that piece of gold that most of us are still looking for
And I've been told that we are all just going through phases
Until god finds something better for us
Before we all curl up and kill ourselves
But no one knows for sure
It's a mystery this thing called love
I always figured you were a going away present
Yet you were just on a layaway for someone else
But if it's okay I'll love you anyway
Its better that I went this way
I was never good for your health
We both knew I would just end up hurting you
Nice.
I couldn't figure out what this meant:I'll you watch from the sunlightShouldn't it be:I'll watch you from the sunlightBut maybe you have something else in mind.
I really, really liked the second one!I never was that piece of gold that most of us are still looking for But I'm not a picture you need to reliveI thought these lines were beautiful. I think I got the meaning of this one: You think that it is you that is killing her, so you must go? That's my half-a$$ed thought. Really liked it. Keep it up!
There's a thin fine line between hate and rage.
Now watch the line be crossed and break!
