Angel Over Me
Before I went to bed that night
I told Him I was ready
If she has to go, you can take her now
Carry her home, sweet deity
The doctor called me late
She couldn't make it through the night
Her fragile heart had given way
Her soul had taken flight
Chorus
Can I go alone
Without new thoughts of you
To guide me through and help me to
Be the best that I can be
When you look down
Do my feet touch the ground
Always hoping to see
My angel over me
Feelings of fear, insecurities near
Trying to find my way
Does she see me smile, go that extra mile
Live for the next today
Only wanting one last goodbye
My memories will have to do
Do you see the woman you'd have me to be
Or the woman that we saw in you
Ok, so there's my first official post, what's everybody think? G.
anybody?
This is a good song - emotional too (I'm not crying, it's just my allergies :cry: )
Are you writing from experience? If you're not, you had me fooled!
By the way, since you're a new member, like me, and you're interested in songwriting why don't you check out the sunday songwriters section? You'd probably find it worthwhile to look into.
"You know, it eez possible to be too attractive." - Pepe le Pew
"Be excellent to each other, and party on dudes." - Bill and Ted
Thanks for the feedback. Not too confident yet, just finding my way back to writing. This song is about my mom who died of cancer. Thanks for the post. I'll check out your suggestion on the sunday songwriters, see you there!
I'm sorry to hear that, rocketgirl.
But have confidence in your songwriting, you have talent.
"You know, it eez possible to be too attractive." - Pepe le Pew
"Be excellent to each other, and party on dudes." - Bill and Ted
hey rocketgirl, this is a beautiful song.. I agree with Rush, you do have talent, the lyrics flow together really nicely, and they give a sense of true experience.. which is often rare in songs and for that I congratulte you. :) .. I'd love to see some more of your work.
Jacqui
"Iam a question to the world... not an answer to be heard."
You guys are great for me ego. Thanks. :)
