[Verse 1]
I'm not sure how to act
My learning is not active
But I'm trying to reinvent my wheel
Although I experience delays in my assembling
[Pre-Chorus A]
From the devil's advocate
Whos brooded over my insecurity in my head
[Chorus A]
Nonetheless
I see a remedy in disclosure
And I feel closure through acceptance
[Verse 2]
Enlightenment gives me a blip of inspiration
Inside my imagination
Making aspirational plans for the future
Making me profoundly happy
Although I struggle to sustain a seamless progression
[Pre-Chorus B]
Because the devil's advocate
Has fantasized over the past in my head
[Chorus B]
Nonetheless
I experience solace in thought
And I feel closure in Today
[Bridge]
Confidence makes me spontaneous and foolish
Flitting my way into being despised
So I took some time
To gaze at your disclosure
Revealing that after all
We are alike
[Verse 3]
So now I attempt to redeem myself
Through benevolence and humility
Although I taste cravings of lust
[Pre-Chorus C]
Through my longing devil's advocate
Whos brooded over my loneliness in my head
[Chorus C]
Nonetheless
I feel happiness with friendship
And I find closure with life
'I know that change means there's still hope. To show this world that I am whole.'
Hey LifeIsThought!
Good song you wrote there. :D
I only had trouble with the 1st verse and have some ideas for it.
[Verse 1]
My learning is not active
I'm not sure how to act
But I'm trying to reinvent my wheel
Although I experience delays in my assembling
You could switch lines 1 & 2 and maybe rework the 4th line to give verse 1 a better flow.
Other then that, like I said you wrote a really good song.
Keep at it!!!
"If I had a time machine, I'd go back and tell me to practise that bloody guitar!" -Vic Lewis
Everything is 42..... again.
Yeah its pretty good, nice work.
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