I cant even explain this... I wish i could write something decent when I'm in a good mood, for some reason it only comes out when I'm ****ed off....
This is meant to be a very long song, mostly musical, long breaks between verse and chorus. Slow to start, after third verse the whole song gets more indepth with a wide open sound, song continues with this untill the end of the second solo when everything is meant to break down into the slow melodic verse... This is the first song I've written where I have arrangment in mind. Feels good to write something that I know what I want the end product to sound like..... to bad it has to be so damn depressing...
comments and critiscm welcomed!
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[Verse]
My life has been drained away
by sorows come and gone
by life passing by
memories of a life given away
[Verse]
My heart broken, twice a day
by tragedy
from far away
memories of a life given away
[Verse]
it's come and gone
passions of eternity held strong
fell through the cracks
of a life gone wrong
[Chorus]
Love to hate
life to death
all come inside
a realm
only I can see
passed through my mind
memories
of a broken past
[Verse]
My soul still seeks a real place
a ground to base, a home alone
a friend my own
memories of a life given away
[Choruse]
Love to hate
a real place
passions gone
a home
only i can see
passed through my mind
memories
of a broken past
[Solo]........................................
[Bridge]
troubles based, on mindless faith
on memories
my life gone wrong
[another solo]........................................
[Slow Chorus]
Love to hate
life to death
memories
of a broken past
'You and I in a little toy shop, bought a bag of balloons with the money we got"
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Lord..I,d be interested in what this sounds like...let me know when it`s availible!
You can sleep when you`re dead!
"and baby all you need...is just a little more love"
sometimes I find that when I'm writing depressing lyrics, it's possible to tack a happy twist on the end and make the song seem quite clever and/or uplifting.
hey, I said sometimes.... not every time!
Yeah, like Hurt!!!
"Like the coldest winter chill. Heaven beside you. Hell within." -Jerry Cantrell
I really liked it. I have a lot of songs like this, and more power to ya if you can find the courage to post them. troubles based, on mindless faithLoved that part. It really digs deep and makes the listener think (especially if they feel the same way.)
Keep it up.
There's a thin fine line between hate and rage.
Now watch the line be crossed and break!
