cut and run, come and have fun
let it all lose, take the booze
remove the ruels,dont be fools
keep your morals(this bit is not finished yet)
come and be yourself,not a square,if you dare
dont give in, unconform,keep it chill,keep that in
take your conformity and throw it in the bin,
your othodox conformity and burn burn burn
come be yourself,not a rasist,equal race
take your orthodox and burn it in the rays
the sun wil burn the sun will burn.
as you can see i got a longway to go !!!
im not like them
but i can pretend
the sun has gone
but i have a light
the day is done
but im haveing fun
i think im dumb
or maybe just happy
i think im just happy..i think im just happy
hey..kinda cool up 2 now man, how about.. keep your morals..u dont wanna choose.. just a thought.. :)
"people laugh at me because im different...i pity you..because your all the same"
I think you have a cool thought going.
It gave me a kinda Sum 41/Good Charlotte feel.
Finish up your thoughts and repost.
Looking forward to the completed song.
I don't think I'm a lot dumber than you think that I thought I once was - White Goodman (Dodgeball)
thanx for your advise but im gunna cry i dont like sum 41 i think there a real dumb band but hey im doing antother to ill post that one when i have finished
im not like them
but i can pretend
the sun has gone
but i have a light
the day is done
but im haveing fun
i think im dumb
or maybe just happy
i think im just happy..i think im just happy
Whoever you like is who I meant to say it sounded like :)
Forget that Sum 41 thang...I still like where you're going!
Keep it up!
Be Blessed!
G
I don't think I'm a lot dumber than you think that I thought I once was - White Goodman (Dodgeball)
i have dissided not to carry on with that one its not me if u understand???
but heres a new one
unmoral are his ways
geniside at his grasp
fuck the unmoral president,
unmoral president,unmoral
president unmoral are his ways
battling against the gays
the disabled the women
the children and his men.
can you see him in his office
cigar in his mouth
condisending on our lives
power by his side
plotting in our dimise
women and children
he will have no mursy
when his fist crushes your face
destruction at a button
in his locked draw
democracy he laughs
as he orders
his brain washed soldiers to attack
and this time it wont be iraq
unmoral are his ways
geniside at his grasp
fuck the unmoral president,
unmoral president,unmoral president
unmoral are his ways
battling against the gays the disabled
the women the children and his men.
crushing through our streets
the tear down the childs face
as his mother is raped
and killed
they burn down our houses
and kill our husbands hang
our childeren and rape
our wives
but we our strong and
we rebel this time we shall not fail
we fight and give our lives to stop
this unjust crewlty
we attack
we crash through
we dont stop
we will win
against the mess
this unmoral president
put use in
we are everyday ches
sit on are arse we will not do
we will listen up
we will act we will provel
im not like them
but i can pretend
the sun has gone
but i have a light
the day is done
but im haveing fun
i think im dumb
or maybe just happy
i think im just happy..i think im just happy
ooops i put the non edit one in heers the finished one
:oops:
unmoral are his ways
geniside at his grasp
fuck the unmoral president,
unmoral president,unmoral
president unmoral are his ways
battling against the gays
the disabled the women
the children and his men.
can you see him in his office
cigar in his mouth
condisending on our lives
power by his side
plotting in our dimise
women and children
he will have no mursy
when his fist crushes your face
destruction at a button
in his locked draw
democracy he laughs
as he orders
his brain washed soldiers to attack
and this time it wont be iraq
unmoral are his ways
geniside at his grasp
fuck the unmoral president,
unmoral president,unmoral president
unmoral are his ways
battling against the gays the disabled
the women the children and his men.
crushing through our streets
the tear down the childs face
as his mother is raped
and killed
they burn down our houses
and kill our husbands hang
our childeren and rape
our wives
but we our strong and
we rebel this time we shall not fail
we fight and give our lives to stop
this unjust crewlty
we attack
we crash through
we dont stop
we will win
against the mess
this unmoral president
put use in
we are everyday ches
sit on are arse we will not do
we will listen up
we will act we will provel
im not like them
but i can pretend
the sun has gone
but i have a light
the day is done
but im haveing fun
i think im dumb
or maybe just happy
i think im just happy..i think im just happy
ok just completly ignor me till im more clever :oops: :oops: :oops:
im not like them
but i can pretend
the sun has gone
but i have a light
the day is done
but im haveing fun
i think im dumb
or maybe just happy
i think im just happy..i think im just happy
ok i think i have over cum my dumbness
heres my finished first and second song tell me what you think and if i could improve it
A WORLD BEHIMD BARS
They say you are free
"the land of the free
who ever told you thats your eneymy"
Democracy sucks but who cares,
lets go to starbucks,
lets cuddle are carebares
lets sit and shut up
it doesn't matter who cares
its a world behind bars
its a place with fears
berry your head in the sand
lets ignor our problems
its easy to say lets give up and walk away....
its a world behind bars
lets set it free
before you give up
before you throw away the key
down in a place
war prisners lay
being beaten and raped
i think these soldiors must be gay.....
or maybe im wrong there just
ignorent fucks who dont give a shit
like the people at home
who sit on there sofas
or lie on there beds
whilst a childs mother now is dead
the ortopsy says she took a bullet to the head
its a world behind bars
its a place with fears
berry your head in the sand
lets ignor our problems
its easy to say lets give up and walk away....
its a world behind bars
lets set it free
before you give up
before you throw away the key
i dont undersand
you have got me lost
i wanna take hold
i wanna be the boss
i think im missing a lesson in life
why does there always have to be strif
its a world behind bars
its a place with fears
berry your head in the sand
lets ignor our problems
its easy to say lets give up and walk away....
its a world behind bars
lets set it free
before you give up
before you throw away the key
INMORAL
inmoral are his ways
geniside at his grasp
fuck the inmoral president,
inmoral president,inmoral
president inmoral are his ways
battling against the gays
the disabled and the children
the women and the men.
can you see him in his office
smoke from his cigar
condisending on our lives
power by his side
plotting in our dimise
women and children
he will have no mursy
when his fist crushes your face
destruction at a button
in his locked draw
democracy he laughs
as he orders
his brain washed soldiers to attack
and this time it wont be iraq
inmoral are his ways
geniside at his grasp
fuck the inmoral president,
inmoral president,inmoral
president inmoral are his ways
battling against the gays
the disabled and the children
the women and the men.
crushing through our streets
the tear down the childs face
as his mother is raped
and killed
they burn down our houses
and kill our husbands hang
our childeren and rape
our wives
but we our strong and
we rebel this time we shall not fail
we fight and give our lives to stop
this unjust crewlty
we attack
we crash through
we dont stop
we will win
against the mess
this unmoral president
put use in
we are everyday ches
sit on are arse we will not do
we will listen up
we will act we will provel
inmoral are his ways
geniside at his grasp
fuck the inmoral president,
inmoral president,inmoral
president inmoral are his ways
battling against the gays
the disabled and the children
the women and the men.
thanx dan
im not like them
but i can pretend
the sun has gone
but i have a light
the day is done
but im haveing fun
i think im dumb
or maybe just happy
i think im just happy..i think im just happy
:shock: sumone anyone :(
im not like them
but i can pretend
the sun has gone
but i have a light
the day is done
but im haveing fun
i think im dumb
or maybe just happy
i think im just happy..i think im just happy
You seem very angry in the song. Which is good, I like anger. Although, I didn't get much of the song maybe its because I'm American and don't really know some of the slang of your country. However, some of the stuff you are saying in the song could fit our newly re-elected president as well.
Hey, you said that you'd reveiw my song if I did yours. So here I am. The songs were good and I liked what you expressed. The one about the president was down too the point and simple to understand. These kind of songs are good every once in a while. For future songs, you should be more detailed of peoples' feelings in the song rather than their action. It will give more imagination use to the listeners. Like the song about seeing the world behind bars created by it's own hate and sin. Great perspective. Great songs though.
Andy
Oh, and see my other song called Fight to end all fights
There's a thin fine line between hate and rage.
Now watch the line be crossed and break!