a little ballad for my woman
roundtrip to mars
i would like to take your hand
whisk us away to a far off land
only you and my beat up guitar
ill show you how special you are
serenade you from london to rio
without you id be like robinson crusoe
all alone in the middle of the blue
trying to get back to you
But what do you know
your my juliet an'
im your romeo
embracing you tight, an'
i'll never let you go
if you wanted the stars
i'd do a roundtrip to mars
and bring you back everyone
bring you back everyone
bring you back everone
wrapped up in a bow
cos i love you so
yes i love you so
And i'll tell it and think it and speak it and breathe it and reflect it from the mountain so all souls can see it.- Bob Dylan,a hard rains gonna fall
It's like Sammy Hagar is belting out. It totally reminded me of something I'd hear from the Red Rocker. Which is a good thing because I really like Sammy's stuff.
I could actually hear that as not a total ballad, but a little more upbeat.
I like it!
I don't think I'm a lot dumber than you think that I thought I once was - White Goodman (Dodgeball)
quite a cool song man..keep it up!
"people laugh at me because im different...i pity you..because your all the same"
thanks for the feedback...this was just a first draft off the cuff , dont know if im gonna put in another verse or two or just go back to the top.
cheers
And i'll tell it and think it and speak it and breathe it and reflect it from the mountain so all souls can see it.- Bob Dylan,a hard rains gonna fall
