She's Not Mine

Ok people. Give me some feedback on this one.

V1
This morning I woke at half past four and then I got polluted
While I watched the wind blowin through my slide glass door
It made me think my life was becoming oh so convoluted
How could I forget about the girl I knew before

Chorus
She was so Irreplacable
She was so Indespensable
She was so Indescribable
But mostly she was mine

V2
I can't imagine of what it was that this girl was constituted
That let her plant that feeling deep inside my core
My nerves are shot I have a need ive been electricuted
so I sit and get polluted by the slide glass door

Chorus
She was so Irreplacable
She was so Indespensable
She was so Indescribable
But mostly she was mine

V3
She was the girl I made the promise would never be substituted
The night we danced and loved until we died upon the floor
But lives they change and you can lose site of all good things rooted
In your soul blown by the wind outside your slide glass door

She is so Irreplacable
She is so Indespensable
She is so Indescribable
But mostly she's not mine

TheJackal.