Hi only my 2nd try at writing any thing .
Am i aloud to put a link here? so people can hear it
Or on Hear Here.
Sofa or Green
V1
Sitting right back on a sofa of green
Wondering how it all weny wrong
Thinking to myself how it could of been
If only i could of been strong
Chorus
But i played away and
So you went astry
Now im lonely
V2
Thinking of you and what i can do
To get you back by my side
Sing you a song to say i was wrong
For going runing wild
CHORUS
V3
Drinking away my days in a haze
Down to my hole in the ground
Then i,ll be free from my misery
From all my clowning around
B7 A7 E
Well thats it let me know what you all think
THX
I love it, its perfect nice job :D
I also like the song. My only nit would be is that nothing stands out to grab the reader or listener. Dont get me wrong it is written well. Maybe you need just a little twist or attitude in it. Then again thats could just be me. take care. Nite........................
lyrics belong in songs, poems bolong in bookstores
Thats a cool picture in your signature...
The king of rock, some say lives
the lizard king, is surely dead
the king of France, lost his head
the King of Kings... bled
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Thx for the feed back gays
I think it a cool littel song but i know what you mean nitetrapper.
E.SHERMAN
Thats a cool picture in your signature...
Is that like nice shoes to a ugly bird :shock: :D
thx all again
I like the song....my only comment is that if you are going to name it Sofa of Green...I would have liked you to describe it some more or have some memories that happened on the sofa....
just a thought
I don't think I'm a lot dumber than you think that I thought I once was - White Goodman (Dodgeball)
