For what it's worth ... this is a freestyle/song I just spit out. It's first draft, rough. All comments, death threats, and criticisms are welcomed as always.
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Rappin' Late Summertime Blues
Okay, Okay, here we go again
Summer's coming to a real slow end
But it's aight cuz I don't mind
I jus make up a freestyle to pass the time
This one went fast, I barely could
enjoy a passing second
Next time I should
Played guitar, blazed some trees
Watched sun sets, met some hunnies
Walked on my head a mile long
Turned around and backwards
with words I sang a song
Spent more time than ever
All by my dirt
Wouldn't change it at all
Some'd say that's curt
Allow me to be frank
cuz I won't hold back
a single thought I trace
to my ending and beginning
it all comes full circle
I take my time with things
somethin like a turtle
Slowly, some would say
but me I say no
It's my perogative
So c'mon man let's go
Summer nights are crazy
I think I lost my wallet
A change is coming, man
And we can't stop it
- mdr
"And under the spreading chestnut tree
I sold you and you sold me" - orwell
:lol: .......My sides hurt...... Not laughing at you, laughing at all of the random lines thrown in there just to make it rhyme. LOL. That's classic.
Watched sun sets, met some hunnies
This should be like this:
Met some hunnies, f*cking like bunnies.
lol. I didn't think you'd mind me changing some of the lines to my entertainment. Keep writing stuff like this (i need a good laugh.)
There's a thin fine line between hate and rage.
Now watch the line be crossed and break!
Well, the first thing you've probably realised about it is that it ain't a very long song once you get spitting those words out. I enjoyed it - not because it made me laugh but because it's got some good ideas in it and I could get hold of some kind of rhythm.
Best,
A :-)
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It's my perogative
I would ditch that line for somewhat obvious reasons. :)
Yeah, the main thing is it's a freestyle. It's quick, spur of the moment, off the top of the head. But I think they're a highly untapped resource especially for song writing because for every, I'd say, couple hundred lines of just decent, rhyming floetry you'll get a gem. It just happens. My problem is I don't record anything and half of my, I'm biased, "best" stuff is quickly off the top of the brain and it just blows with the wind and lost forever.
Ah, well. Appreciate the responses.
- mdr
"And under the spreading chestnut tree
I sold you and you sold me" - orwell
I like to freestyle (usually against people is always fun!) I know that the random lines were just spat out, so dont take offense. It was just unlike anything that's usually posted here. It was ammussing at the time.
There's a thin fine line between hate and rage.
Now watch the line be crossed and break!
