Hey, songwritetrs, MGH here with a new song. Opinions, and compliments welcome, thanks
P.S please excuse the spelling.
Summertime is around the bend
Schools almost out, it's about to end.
New believers are being baptized,
old crops die, and new crops arise
Go to church every now and then,
pray for those who may live in sin
talk to new people, ask them how they've been.
A nice cold pool would hit the spot,
The summers comming fast and its getting hot.
flowers grow along the interstate
it may hit 80 the chances are really great.
yeah, Summertime is around the bend
Schools almost out, it's about to end.
New believers are being baptized,
old crops die, and new crops arise
Fishing pole and a pepsi can,
I hope I get soemtihng, other than a tan.
watch the sun set over a field of hay
man I could do this everyday.
Summertime has come atlast
I think more about the future and less about the past.
Turn on the car radio, and hear a good tune,
and drive around all afternoon.
Summertime is around the bend
It dosnt last forever, and we know it will end
so let the sun shine,
and lets have a good time.
Summertime...
ummm....
MG..read this a few times...there are some good lines here..wasn`t sure about the "flow".....just a few suggestions from one persons opinion...do you have chords to this?
Go to church every now and then,
pray for those who may live in sin
talk to new people, ask them how they've been...as..
Go to church every now and then,
pray for those who may live in sin.
Talk to new people and old friends,
ask how they`re doing and how`ve they been
A nice cold pool would hit the spot,
The summers comming fast and its getting hot.
flowers grow along the interstate
it may hit 80 the chances are really great.....hmmmm...
A nice cool pool would hit the spot,
summers comin` fast and it`s getting hot,
flowers and the heat rise from the interstate
the chances of eighty, are really great
Summertime has come atlast
I think more about the future and less about the past.
Turn on the car radio, and hear a good tune,
and drive around all afternoon.......as
Summertime is here it`s come at last,
got me thinkin` `bout the future and less about the past
turn on the radio and I hear a good tune
keeps driving me`,all afternoon
You can sleep when you`re dead!
"and baby all you need...is just a little more love"
MG..read this a few times...there are some good lines here..wasn`t sure about the "flow".....just a few suggestions from one persons opinion...do you have chords to this?
Go to church every now and then,
pray for those who may live in sin
talk to new people, ask them how they've been...as..
Go to church every now and then,
pray for those who may live in sin.
Talk to new people and old friends,
ask how they`re doing and how`ve they been
A nice cold pool would hit the spot,
The summers comming fast and its getting hot.
flowers grow along the interstate
it may hit 80 the chances are really great.....hmmmm...
A nice cool pool would hit the spot,
summers comin` fast and it`s getting hot,
flowers and the heat rise from the interstate
the chances of eighty, are really great
Summertime has come atlast
I think more about the future and less about the past.
Turn on the car radio, and hear a good tune,
and drive around all afternoon.......as
Summertime is here it`s come at last,
got me thinkin` `bout the future and less about the past
turn on the radio and I hear a good tune
keeps driving me`,all afternoon
Thanks alot man, Ill use that. and thanks for helping me out. I only made this "song"in 3 hours so yeah. and to the second poster, not cool.
I dont have the chords to this yet, thats usualy what I do mid to last, annyway thanks again.
MG..when you get the chords send them along...if you can post a recording that would be cool too...
You can sleep when you`re dead!
"and baby all you need...is just a little more love"
