MG..read this a few times...there are some good lines here..wasn`t sure about the "flow".....just a few suggestions from one persons opinion...do you ...

Please, I really need feedback on the recent lyrics. Thanks if you can.

Hey, I rewrote the song, a tad, gave it some more tune and rythem, tell me what you think. Thanks.He drives a chevelle he got,way back when.He tuned i...

Good lyrics, really good.

Thank you, all the songs I write are based on true matters. This song only took me about 3 weeks to think up and, write down. Thanks for the informati...

What needs to be done on this song?

Its just a country song, and its about a man, whos life is in sin, and what not.

Here is the second version of the song, please point out the good the bad, and the rough edges. Thanks."classic Chevelle"He drives a classic chevelle....

Actualy before I changed it around a bit, it was "road to jail" so Ill change it back, thanks alot.

I cannot seem to get a good tune going when I sing it aloud, but your lyrics and setup are great.