i came up with this one at Work tonight...5 mins...u'll see why so short lol..but i like it..... called
The Little Things
Written by Greg Drummond ©2004
I love the little things
All the little things about you
I love how I can sport you from a far
I love you just the way you are
I love the little things
All the little things you do
I love the way you say my name
I love how it's never a game
Chorus
Oh the little things
The little things
This is what I've found
The little things make this little world go round
I hate the little things
All the little things about you
I hate how I can sport you from a far
I hate you just the way you are
I hate the little things
All the little things you do
I hate the way you say my name
I hate how it's always a game
Chorus
THIS READS QUITE GOOD BUT FOR SOME REASON AND I DON'T KNOW WHY IT HAS A VERY FAMILIAR SORT OF FLOW ?
I'M NOT SUGGESTING ANYTHING JUST IT HAS A VERY FAMILAR FLOW I'LL LET YOU KNOW WHAT IT IS WHEN THE PENNY DROPS ( IN MY OLD GREY MATTER )
BUT I DO LIKE IT VERY MUCH
CHEERS
Aghhhh
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I'm now a bloody senior member
Are you people trying to tell me I'm old or what ?
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I definately like the idea of starting it one way and ending it the other.
very cool.
Maybe you could put a little bridge after chorus 1 to say:
but time goes by...now I don't know why but...
and then go into verse 2.
That's not a great example but you get the idea.
Just a thought.
I don't think I'm a lot dumber than you think that I thought I once was - White Goodman (Dodgeball)
hmm...i'm not sure.....does it sound familiar....
and yes, i plan on doing a short little bridge, to u know link the change.....i think i'd go into the minor from that point...who knows?
hi'ya
me again well it's been a while since I said this piece had a farmiliar flow to it " well the fog has cleared and the penny has dropped " and I was wrong .
I actuually had a song by Good Charlott in the back of my head for some reason , I guess it was the Title Little things I'm sure you know the song I'm talking about
"Those little things little things to me they mean a lot"
sorry about that , but I guess when one ages likes me one does get a"little" confused
sorry
cheers
Aghhhh
Not only am I a senior citizen
I'm now a bloody senior member
Are you people trying to tell me I'm old or what ?
over 700 posts ( I really do need to get out more )
I know the song you're talking about, lotto. I thought the song was good. I didn't quite understand why you wrote I love/hate how it’s never/always a game I wasn't sure what that meant. But I still liked it.
There's a thin fine line between hate and rage.
Now watch the line be crossed and break!
what i ment by i love/Hate how it's never/always a game
is that the love how its never a game is the person kinda saying the nice thing cause they're in love...the opposite is obviously they dnot care what they say.. i think :P