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(@mysticmoonangel)
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does the baby baby part sound to much like Brit?

Walking on an ocean mist

Oh, Baby, Baby I found sweet bliss
Yah I'm walking on an ocean mist
Oh I found it thru your finger tips
Yah never knew it could be like this.

Riding waves on the ocean blue
Is how I feel when I'm with you
No one else could take your place
Baby I love your sweet face..

Oh Baby Baby
I never Knew this world exists
Until our first kiss
electric touch of your finger tips

Oh Baby Baby
Please touch me again
I don't want this feeling to ever end
Take me away to the ocean blue
Cause that's were I love being with you

Oh, Baby, Baby I found sweet bliss
Yah I'm walking on an ocean mist
Oh I found it thru your finger tips
Yah never knew it could be like this

Never new this world exist
Until our first kiss…………


   
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(@anonymous)
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don't worry about it. trying not to be like someone else is not much better than trying to be like someone else.


   
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(@guerillacharlie)
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Heh i guess that is a bit like Brit, but im sure you would not sing those words exactly like her. i think this was a pretty good song. Not my style personally but im open enough to not just poo poo it. Well writen. :wink:


   
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(@mysticmoonangel)
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thanks for the replies and taken the time......
:wink:


   
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(@nitetrapper)
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Nice well written lyric. Good job Ken...............

lyrics belong in songs, poems bolong in bookstores


   
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(@cabreraluvr7)
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thats really good!! :D


   
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(@mysticmoonangel)
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:o
i never expected so many good replys on this song
thanks everyone :D


   
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(@country-t)
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I think its good, I don't know what music you have for it, probably pop but i've been sitting here playing the guitar to it and its fast and sounds interesting, I like the concise wording


   
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(@mysticmoonangel)
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thanks countryT

:D thats cool that your playing a tune for it personaly i dont play a insterment :( so i have no tune for it i would love to hear your verson of it though if you do any recording

mystic


   
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(@country-t)
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I don't think that the Brittnay thing comes into play because it depends solely on the rythmn and what way you were to phrase the line. Obviously you would try to steer clear of her exact line.
I think this is a sweet song which if you were open to altering slightly could be done really well. I think of the Dolly Parton song "love is like a butterfly" when I read it.
Its a love song, an innocent love song with sexual undertones running throughout. I'd like to put some music to it, with permission?


   
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(@mysticmoonangel)
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:D hi CountryT
i think u are right about the brit thing and no it would not be sung that way I think I just kept hearing that because the kids had said somthing to me about how brit sings the oh baby baby part and seeing as how i dont sing it like it should be sung it probably reminds them of her..lol... :lol:
go ahead and put music to it i would love to here what u can do with it

:D mystic


   
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(@country-t)
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I'll try


   
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