Walking on an ocean mist

don't worry about it. trying not to be like someone else is not much better than trying to be like someone else.

Heh i guess that is a bit like Brit, but im sure you would not sing those words exactly like her. i think this was a pretty good song. Not my style personally but im open enough to not just poo poo it. Well writen. :wink:

thanks for the replies and taken the time......
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Nice well written lyric. Good job Ken...............

thats really good!! :D

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i never expected so many good replys on this song
thanks everyone :D

I think its good, I don't know what music you have for it, probably pop but i've been sitting here playing the guitar to it and its fast and sounds interesting, I like the concise wording

thanks countryT

:D thats cool that your playing a tune for it personaly i dont play a insterment :( so i have no tune for it i would love to hear your verson of it though if you do any recording

mystic

I don't think that the Brittnay thing comes into play because it depends solely on the rythmn and what way you were to phrase the line. Obviously you would try to steer clear of her exact line.
I think this is a sweet song which if you were open to altering slightly could be done really well. I think of the Dolly Parton song "love is like a butterfly" when I read it.
Its a love song, an innocent love song with sexual undertones running throughout. I'd like to put some music to it, with permission?

:D hi CountryT
i think u are right about the brit thing and no it would not be sung that way I think I just kept hearing that because the kids had said somthing to me about how brit sings the oh baby baby part and seeing as how i dont sing it like it should be sung it probably reminds them of her..lol... :lol:
go ahead and put music to it i would love to here what u can do with it

:D mystic

I'll try