I think its deadly

I think its very good, if you want you could change "surrendering" to surrendered, thats all, what vibe is the music?

I'll try

I don't think that the Brittnay thing comes into play because it depends solely on the rythmn and what way you were to phrase the line. Obviously you ...

I think its good, I don't know what music you have for it, probably pop but i've been sitting here playing the guitar to it and its fast and sounds in...