here's another one of my sweetened improv's, it's a little confusing, but I think something gets through
you're not so bad
it's no good to hate yourself all the time
I love you so much
so let me in to show you how beautiful you are
want to show you who I am
to give that diamond inside
a chance to shine
so open up tonight
this room has no light,
but the pure white from you
shining on me
waiting for you
I've been playing my ego gone
waiting for you to come
I refused this wine
to give you me and mine
but how do I know you
let not this romantic fool you
his heart is no match for love
let this nimbleness fade
come back another day
when I am thoughtful
I will find you
well, no rhythm, rhyme, or meter, ah wtf
I don't follow my dreams, I just ask em' where they're going and catch up with them later.
-Mitch Hedburg
Did you see that!
I loved the first section
you're not so bad
it's no good to hate yourself all the time
I love you so much
so let me in to show you how beautiful you are
I would love to see you go into some specific things that the person thinks are bad about themselves and then show them that they are actual beautiful traits.
I didn't have any specific ideas of what those could be, but I'd like to see some :)
I don't think I'm a lot dumber than you think that I thought I once was - White Goodman (Dodgeball)
yeah, I strayed quite a bit from the point, I'll rewrtie this whole thing up with the beginning in mind, thnx
I don't follow my dreams, I just ask em' where they're going and catch up with them later.
-Mitch Hedburg
Did you see that!
