Very Good,
I like your voice too.
This kind of reminds me of Shel Silverstien's book
The Giving Tree.
John
Hey, David,
I just listened to your song--actually I'm listening to it now. Wow, that's beautiful. The music touched me, but then I read the lyrics and if I weren't such a big strong macho man, I might've even puddled up. But I didn't, of course. Great song. Doesn't even need anything else in the way of instruments. If anything maybe some strings--cello, bass. But it's great as is.
I like FunkE, too. Really nice music. Definitely worth putting words to--or you could use it as a bridge somewhere. Really nice. I'll listen to some more when I get another moment. Thanks.
Joe
This is such a beautiful song!
If you want some female vocals - im happy to help
AKDx
WATER AND FIRE
i agree with everyone so far,
really, such a nice song.
epsecially like
'her love... never really dies,
but she does... and ...'
your expecting another 'love' rhyme so when you hear 'but she does...' it really hits you. Well it hit me, anyway :)
well done.
