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Joe
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Joined: May 1, 2005
Topics: 59 / Replies: 445
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17 years ago
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Re: WK 49 Titles

Actually this already sounds like part of a song. I'd go with that.Symetrical LiesSurrogate DreamsIt Sounded RightEasily Gleaned

17 years ago
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RE: week 40

Actually your English sounds better than most Americans'.

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RE: week 40

I think sometimes song lyrics are better when they're just simple and to the point. Believe it or not, not everyone knows what the word encompassing m...

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RE: week 40

For a title I was thinking "She Thinks Why" How about "Why Should She Bother?"This had a lot of potential, but you're right, it came off more like a...

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RE: Y5week39 bits and pieces

The willow winds itself until it touches The creek where it's shallow Where you stand with your crutches The image these lines inspire seems to warra...

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RE: SSG5 Week 35 - Reparation ( MP3 Added )

Finally got to hear your music. Like Elle, I'm always wanting to speed things up, too--a personality thing perhaps, but you did a great job with the t...

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RE: Wk36--Choices

Thanks Elle. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment. I have music, yes. I may try to record it next weekend if I can get caught up on my...

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17 years ago
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RE: SUNDAY SONGWRITER'S GROUP - Week 36

That should be easy. I think we're all trapped in one way or another. Mostly in our own minds. Good luck, everyone.

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RE: SSG5 - Week35 - Hard Sell - with mp3 (bass line)

That's a nice sound, Paul. I really like that. Vocals sound really good, too. And I like the change in the chorus. Well done.Joe

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RE: Wk 35--Adam West

Okay, thanks, Guys.Vic, no, of course I don't want you to lie. This song was written in 2005 for the title Adam West Will Always Be Batman. I thought ...

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RE: SSG5 - Week35 - Hard Sell - with mp3 (bass line)

Cos baby I come as a package And you don't get nothing for free So try and then buy, well that's fine by me But you know you'll get more than you see ...

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RE: SSG5 Week 35 - Reparation ( MP3 Added )

That's intense SP. Very strong lyrics. Nothing forced. Everything flows well. Good words but nothing pretentious. Well-done.Joe

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RE: Wk 35--Adam West

Thanks SP. Yes, it is a metaphor. I guess it doesn't seem melodramatic to me because when I sing it it's light and upbeat. I also tend to use humor in...

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