I listened to Kiss Me. Really nice. Good music, and I can hear your voice even better. I love it. Great job. Kudos to Hilch, too, who I understand wro...

Hey, Elle,I know what you mean about hearing something in your head a lot better than you can produce it, but I think you did fine--we can imagine the...

Actually, I like it. Simple, but meaningful. Well done. Looking forward to hearing it.

Good song, Doug. I especially like the chorus. Well done.

Yeah, I got what you meant, which is why I suggested that? Maybe it's just the way I think, but in my head would come the question--"What? Am I just l...

Love it, Neil. Lyrics and music. I like the way you fade out singing Time out. Terrific. Joe

Ha, I like that, Slowplay--especially the title. Well done. Looking forward to hearing it.Joe

Nice work, Trevor. First verse, second line, I'd leave out the word "ever." I like: Don't tell me it's not you it's me. Probably a lot of people hav...

Interesting lyrics and theme, Vic. I'm not going to add anything because I think the others have offered plenty of great ideas and soon it won't feel ...

Chess a sport? That's funny. Did you go to band camp, too? Ha, just kidding. I like the lyrics. I'd leave the word "that" out of the line "How much I ...

I like the music. Lyrics are fun, too, though I'd like to hear some of it sung--like maybe the chorus at least. All in all, though, I enjoyed it. Look...

I think that works.