ya that new third line sucks haha I think im just gonna leave that part like it was, the rest of the rewrite is good though.
"And above all, respond to all questions regarding a given song's tonal orientation in the following manner: Hell, it don't matter just kick it off!"
-Chris Thile
Why not just repeat the original second line as the third line?
And every road leads back to you
But I'm just passing straight on through
Yeah I'm just passing straight on through
Or something like that?
Looking forward to more.
Peace
And the road leads back to you
But im passin strait through
Still chasin that veil of you
"And above all, respond to all questions regarding a given song's tonal orientation in the following manner: Hell, it don't matter just kick it off!"
-Chris Thile
