I'm having trouble coming up with choruses this week, but here are 2 - if I come up with the third, I'll add it later:
A Stillborn Epiphany (gjbrake)
At the end of all your hopes and dreams
and everything you thought life could be
you open your eyes and pray to see
but find nothing but a stillborn epiphany
Soulless Grey (Karla)
In the harsh light
of a crisis of faith
what was black and white
now melts away
into a soulless grey
Portia,
A Stillborn Epiphany was one title that really didn't do much for me but you did a excellent job with it.
Turned my thinking around I like when that happens.
Very nice,
Celt
Hi Portia
A Stillborn Epiphany (gjbrake)
I think this was one of the more difficult titles and you did a an admirable job on it, well done. Putting some verses to it is not going to be easy either.
Soulless Grey (Karla)
I think the way you've written this one leaves great scope for someone to expand on the two opposites whatever they might be, and of course in the end it doesn't matter cos the answer is somewhere in between. Good stuff. :D
pbee
Hi Portia
Very atmospheric - difficult titles to write for but good going
Good stuff
Bob :)
You are what you eat, eat well
very nice, you always do excelent work.
Hey!! Who moved my cheese???
They say that only 1 song in 100 is good!?! I think I need a lot more scratch paper!!!
A Stillborn epiphany was very good, I had no Idea what to do with that one! :lol: --the dog
