My favorite submission of this batch is "This song has been deleted " I think that this could be a whole lot of fun and a protest at the same time. ...

jojolargo,It is nice to have you along with us, welcome to the family.You picked an interesting week to make you first post. Your work is good, I lik...

very nice, you always do excelent work.

A Campbell's soup song....Mmm Mmm Good :!:

Well my friend, you have done a fine job with this entry. The power and defiance convied in the bridge is my favored part of this entry but the secon...

A hearty welcome to you Dr. Grace.Interesting song, thanks for explaining the references, I would never have figures out what blunnies meant. The lin...

I can offer no cirtique that will better this piece. Would like to see a lead sheet for it if you could muster one.

Reads to me like a 21 Century protest song. Hey...where did all of the good protest songs go? Looks like we have one here. It took me a bit to get ...

There is a clear movement in the song from helpless victim to self reflection to control all laced with a bit of hope and a healthy dose of anger. Th...

O.K. well, before I am willing to cirtique the work of others I will take a look at my own submission.Evenly paced and rythmic in nature. Simple enou...