Missed last week, just barely made this week, it is 11:25 P.M. on Satruday night as I post this. Time and creativety have been sorely lacking in the last few weeks. No excueses just reasons.
Angels and Demons they watch over me
Recording every breath that I take
With the eternal pulling and pushing
It rip at my soul their hoping to seal my fate
All the wealthy in their plush ivory towers
Stealing crumbs from the poorest of the poor
And the darkest of angels keeps driving the need
That the world's mone and power can't fill
Desire blinds me with my wants and my needs
While visions of suffering sober me with truth
The ageless war continues surging and raging on
With our hearts and minds the sought after prize
So the Good and the Evil play out their game
With nation after nation choosing a way
Dominance and submission fight to prevail
Continuing endlessly until the end of time
Angels and Demons are watcing over me
Eagerly following the moves that I make
They'll keep pushing and pulling for eternity
Damnation or paradise which will it be
For my friends that thought my last few submissions had to much rhyme, :oops: I hope this one is a little more to your taste. :) Till next time, Good writing to all!! :lol: :lol: :lol:
Hey!! Who moved my cheese???
They say that only 1 song in 100 is good!?! I think I need a lot more scratch paper!!!
Redrider,
Time and creativety have been sorely lacking in the last few weeks. No excueses just reasons
I know what you mean It's 6:45AM Sunday and I'm trying to get some critques in while the rest of the family sleeps in and I have some quiet time.
I like this piece Good Job. I find it interesting how you spread the assigned word out through the entire song. Nice Moral without feling like your preaching.
Celt
