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 Celt
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Desert Wind

It's a lonesome ride
through a barren tract
words filled with pride
that you can't take back
lose your soul
when you lose a friend
so let it go
to the desert wind

Desert wind
hear my Prayer
raise it high
with your healing air
warm the hearts
of those I've wronged
And bring us each
where we belong

When we last spoke
it's been some time
we paid the price
but did no crime
we had our quarrels
let's not pretend
just give it all
to the desert wind

Desert wind
set us free
ease this pain
to some degree
the blowing sands
may sting the eyes
but clears the air
of careless lies.

It's a lonesome ride
through a barren tract
words filled with pride
that you can't take back
lose your soul
when you lose a friend
so let it go
to the desert wind

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(@anonymous)
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it has a nice rhythm


   
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 pbee
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Celt,

I like this song, I like the way the "Desert Wind" is a symbol of life and time (that heals all things). I think these lines a pretty cool too words filled with pride
that you can't take back
weve all said a few of those.


Check out my Reverbnation page here


   
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(@pierson)
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I'm agreeing with pbee. Great song.Desert wind
hear my Prayer
raise it high
with your healing air
warm the hearts
of those I've wronged
And bring us each
where we belongThis was my favorite part. Keep it up!

There's a thin fine line between hate and rage.
Now watch the line be crossed and break!


   
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(@redrider)
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I can offer no cirtique that will better this piece. Would like to see a lead sheet for it if you could muster one.

Hey!! Who moved my cheese???

They say that only 1 song in 100 is good!?! I think I need a lot more scratch paper!!!


   
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