Wow Dave - knocked out by your MP3's!
I liked the first one, agree with Trevor, you have an excellent voice - reminds me of Art Garfunkel, and that's pretty high praise....
But the "totally new and different" MP3 is fabulous - you've really done a radical job on this, and in my opinion it's truly an EXCELLENT song....
I really am looking forward to hearing more from you.....
Great song mate!!!!!
:D :D :D :D :D
Vic
"Sometimes the beauty of music can help us all find strength to deal with all the curves life can throw us." (D. Hodge.)
Thanks everyone for your kind comments. I myself agree with your comments that the original song is better, but I'm pretty proud of the second song too. I'm especially proud of coming up with that nervous/service rhyme. Now I've got to try to come up with something about a new beginning. Hmm.... I've got nothing so far. :-)