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Week 37 - "The Kings Head"

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(@vic-lewis-vl)
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The King's Head

A few of us used to come here in the old days,
Sit in the back room around our guitars,
Trading licks and ideas, all of us dreaming ,
About the days when we'd be stars…….

But one by one we all drifted away,
Bob got married and Jeff just got bored,
Steve got Religion and Andy got lucky,
He struck it rich and he went abroad…….

I left for a few years, couple of marriages,
Didn't work out, found myself here,
Back in my home town and at a loose end,
One afternoon I called in for a beer……

The place that once rocked was now almost silent,
The only noise was the juke-box humming,
I couldn't stand the virtual vacuum,
Took up my guitar and I started strumming……..

Landlady said, “That's nice, what is it?”
“An old Creedence song, “Looking out My Back Door”,
I replied, then she said,”We could do with some music,
“I love all the old stuff, you do any more?”

So I played some Beatles, some Stones, some more Creedence,
Everly's, Orbison, even Link Wray,
She said, “D'you think if I paid you some money,
“You could come in, play requests on Fridays?”

That was six years ago, now I play three nights,
One in the week, Friday/Saturday,
It took a while for things to get going,
Now I get people come to hear me play…….

I play songs for lovers, like the two in the corner,
They always ask for “I got you Babe”,
Songs for the lost and songs for the lonely,
Songs for the ones who are off to the rave…….

Stan and Dolly, always want “Heartbeat”,
Always kiss at the appropriate place,
Susan and Barry, “You'll never walk alone”,
As they gaze into each other's face………

There's an old guy called Freddie, sits in a corner,
Nobody takes any notice of him,
He's a nice guy really, I see him on Sundays,
Man, can he belt out those hymns…….

There's a bunch of young kids on the way to a night-club,
Don't give a hoot what music I play,
There's a couple of them, though, come up to me,
Said “Hey man, that's good stuff you play”

So I sit on my stool and I play my guitar,
There's a million songs I have to play,
I have songs for lovers, the lost and the lonely,
I've nothing better to do today……….

But I wish just one time that I was a listener,
Instead of a player I'd make a request…….
Play me a song for the man with no roots,
Some old blues song would go down best……..

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Sorry this is so long, but once I got into it I didn't know when or where to stop! Like I've said before, you get a good image, a good start-point, then off you go .........this could probably stand a little revision here and there but I've played it through 3 times and the words and music do seem to go well together.......nice simple 3-chorder with a couple of sus4ths chucked in........

Sort of semi autobiographical.........I did used to go there in the old days (the 70's!!!!) and when I came back to live here it was totally dead - but a few of us have got a sort of guitar session going every now and then ...and people do seem to enjoy it..........

"Sometimes the beauty of music can help us all find strength to deal with all the curves life can throw us." (D. Hodge.)


   
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(@straycat)
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hello vic.

dude, I'm wiping at the corner of my eye right now...your song touched me, seems really melancholy to me(which I always love)

I know the problem of writing too long songs and just not being able to cut out anything...belongs there, doesn't it? anyway I can't see why you should shorten it;)

the last verse is the best ending possible for this song.

thank you for that.love it.
bluenightangel

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(@anonymous)
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Wow Vic

Yet another good song - no a great song.

To me it reads more like a poem, I can see it softly spoken over a simple acoustic tune.

Cant wait to hear all these Lewis classics for real.

Rock on m/!


   
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hey, when the songs going that well why feel u need to stop!

theres one thing i'm uncomfortable about however,
the line 'Play me a song for the man with no roots'
because arguablely the man in the song has come back to his roots, playing music in the same bar as he did in his youth,

how about changing 'no roots' to 'dead roots', since that seems to be what the song is about, how its not like it used to be?

rob:)


   
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(@vic-lewis-vl)
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Good point Rob!!!

I looked at it again and see what you're getting at, the singer's roots are in the bar......then again, "no roots" was a sort of passing reference to the two failed marriages.....

I was also trying to get across a sense of killing time - he's playing in the bar while pondering his future ("Back in my home town and at a loose end", "I've nothing better to do today")....so I've changed it to "missing roots" rather than dead...trying to convey the message that he's looking to put down some roots....

"Sometimes the beauty of music can help us all find strength to deal with all the curves life can throw us." (D. Hodge.)


   
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(@scratchmonkey)
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Just my opinion of course, but I liked the "...man with no roots" line. I thought it was the best line in the song. and I echo bluenightangels sentiments that the last verse is wonderful. I was thinking something like:

... Play me a song for the man with no roots,
and a wanderlust that won't rest.

or something. Sorta like the guy's come home, but who's to say he'll be staying. He's there until he blows again. I dunno. That's the feel I got from it.

But it really is outstanding, Vic. Well done.

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It's good Vic.

Sing or talk the lyrics back over a rhythm - walking to the bus or the shops is a good way to get a rhythm going - a few thousand times, and I think it'll suggest a few changes to sort out some line lengths.

Otherwise, I think it's a fine song.

A :-)

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(@vic-lewis-vl)
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That last verse is really messing with my head!!!

It just doesn't sound right with "missing roots" - so I changed it back.....

:? :roll:

"Sometimes the beauty of music can help us all find strength to deal with all the curves life can throw us." (D. Hodge.)


   
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