Skip to content
scratchmonkey
scratchmonkey
@scratchmonkey
Honorable Member
Joined: Apr 28, 2004
Topics: 55 / Replies: 548
Reply
Re: Year 11 Wk 15 Karen and The Rain

Love it, Celt. As I do most of your work. I really can't see anything I would change. I love the chorus. It very poetically sums up what I've trie...

10 years ago
Reply
Re: Y10W52 The Apocalypse came yesterday

This reads well to me, although I thought it was a bit odd that you repeated verses. Not that it's wrong, just that I used to use a very formulaic a...

10 years ago
Reply
Re: 10/52 The Apocalyptic Polka

Can't speak to the technical musical aspects of the song, -- it's been a LONG time since I studied theory. And if you ever found my piano teacher, (a...

10 years ago
Reply
Re: End Of The World

Hey Vic,I really like the song, -- and I'm partial to the "this side of life" suggestion.Also, I''m having a very similar year. I've had two doctors ...

10 years ago
Reply
Re: Y10 wk41 -- Double D

I've been away from playing for as long as I've been away from writing. So it's going to be quite a while before I'm ready to record anything.

10 years ago
Reply
Re: Y10 wk41 -- Double D

James,I just typed out a very lengthy response to your feedback, attempting to address each item. My squirrely laptop ditched it. (I hate this lapto...

10 years ago
Reply
Re: Y10 wk41 -- Double D

John, Andy,Thanks for the input. I'll keep it in mind as I think I am going to attempt a couple / few re-writes of this and see if I can get it where...

10 years ago
Reply
Re: Y10 wk41 -- Double D

All good thoughts, James. Thanks for the feedback.I was actually trying to capture the feeling of an actual diner in my town, called the Double-T. I...

10 years ago
Topic
Replies: 10
Views: 2269
Reply
Re: Year 10 Wk 41 Reservoir Road

Hey John,I'm not sure I'm real comfy with the amount of repetition of "Reservoir Road". Although that could easily change (and I suspect it probably ...

10 years ago
Reply
Re: SSG year 10, Week 40 Karen

Hey John,Look forward to reading your material again. I always enjoyed the stuff you put together.

10 years ago
Reply
Re: Y10 W41 - Home Again

Also meant to mention, -- I love the Outro. I've experienced that personally, and I'm sure many of your listeners will have also. So it definitely r...

10 years ago
Reply
Re: Y10 W41 - Home Again

I REALLY like the feeling of this. I concur with MrEWorm's comments. Sometimes we throw in words just to get the rhythm right in our head, but over ...

10 years ago
Reply
Re: SSG Year 10 Week 41

Whoa... we get points now? I'm gonna have to work harder at this. So, if I write a song about 3rd stool from the right at the Double T on Rt. 40 in ...

10 years ago
Reply
Re: SSG year 10, Week 40 Karen

Good to hear someone has gone beyond "forum user" status. Hope he is making a good living from his art. I don't know if he's making a living at it....

10 years ago
Page 1 / 41