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(@pearlthekat)
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Merry Christmas. I'm all alone.
Merry Chirstmas. I'm all alone.
Just me sitting here in this big old living room.

It's global warmiing time. we ain't got no snow.
It's global warming time. We ain't got mo snow.
the sky's all bright and shiny, the air's soft and mellow.

what'd you get for chirstmas. I hope it was nice.
What'd you get for chirstmas. I hope it was nice.
I got the cats some cat food and brand new rabbit fur mice.


   
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(@celt)
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Hey,

Good Job I like this even if it is a bit depressing

I might suggest you kick up the Blues, Christmas
and Winter imagery a little though.

Here's my edit as an example:

It's Merry Christmas time and I'm all alone.
It's Merry Christmas time Baby and I'm all alone.
Just sitting here with my egg nog in this big old empty room.

With all this global warming seems we ain't got no snow.
With all this global warming seems we ain't got no snow
The sidewalks and streets are all clean but I ain't got no place to go

What'd you get for Christmas. I hope Santa treated you nice.
Said what'd you get for Christmas. I hope Santa treated you nice.
I got the cats some cat food and some brand new rabbit fur mice.

Hope you have a Happy New Year

John

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" It's easier than waiting around to die" Townes Van Zandt


   
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(@pearlthekat)
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good suggestion. i'll think up my own imagery when i get a little time.


   
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(@montezuma)
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Could almost do for the contradictions assignment (Merry Xmas - NOT)
Anyway, I hope you didn't really have an Xmas like that.
Seasons Greetings
Ola

“Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you. And all you can do is go where they can find you.” - Winnie the Pooh


   
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(@barnabus-rox)
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Hi Pearl

Trying to catch up here sorry for the lateness of my reply ,

W O W ... What a sad song , here I am remembering all the fun we had and I read this and nearly cried ...
{ sniffs big boy now Trev pull them back } :lol: :lol:

I like Johns suggestions ...

I hope this wasn't your Christmas as that would have been really sad ...

Cheers
Trev.. :wink:

Here is to you as good as you are
And here is to me as bad as I am
As good as you are and as bad as I am
I'm as good as you are as bad as I am


   
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