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Y7 Week 44 - Stop - Dylan Barrett

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(@dylanbarrett)
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Hi all

No idea of chords or style...

Stop

Staring at my face when
your life falls into place
I am your time to live
I am your time to die
I am your time laugh
I am your time to cry....

I am the first thing that will be
at a birth of your humanity
Your always waiting watching time
You are watching as you cross the line
You are waiting as the train comes in
You are watching as your work begins
I am your time to live and die
I am your time to laugh and cry..

I am the moment when your world began to spin
I do not stop I will not end as your life is closing in
If you think your life is in my hands think twice
My hands are in your life

If I am wrong or if I'm right
It doesn't matter day or night
Your always waiting watching time
Your always checking for the signs
Your waiting for the bell to ring
Your waiting for the bird to sing
I am your time to live and die
I am your time to laugh and cry

I am the moment when your world began to spin
I do not stop I will not end as your life is closing in
If you think your life is in my hands think twice
My hands are in your life

If I stop I will go on
I'm always right and never wrong
Your always waiting watching time
You use the moment to unwind
You live your life by what I say
You think I rule the night and day
And if you fall and break the clock
Maybe it's time for life to ... stop

Thanks for reading.

Rock on!
D 8)

I'm nowhere near Chicago. I've got six string, 8 fingers, two thumbs, it's dark 'cos I'm wearing sunglasses - Hit it!


   
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 KR2
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If you think your life is in my hands think twice
My hands are in your life

Whoa!

It's the rock that gives the stream its music . . . and the stream that gives the rock its roll.


   
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(@dylanbarrett)
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If you think your life is in my hands think twice
My hands are in your life

Whoa!

Thanks Ken - I am exceptionally happy with that line (bet it's been done before somewhere though :roll: )

Rock on!
D 8)

I'm nowhere near Chicago. I've got six string, 8 fingers, two thumbs, it's dark 'cos I'm wearing sunglasses - Hit it!


   
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 KR2
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It's brilliant . . .

reminds me of two lines from one of Nick's songs . . . about time . . .

got me a watch, what a waste of time
all it ever tells me is, it's too late

It's the rock that gives the stream its music . . . and the stream that gives the rock its roll.


   
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 pbee
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Hi Dylan,

I really like this one, it plays as a rock or metal song in my head, really fast paced well done.

Cheers
Paul


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If you think your life is in my hands think twice
My hands are in your life

Whoa!

Thanks Ken - I am exceptionally happy with that line (bet it's been done before somewhere though :roll: )

Rock on!
D 8)

If it has, I don't recall it. Same stylistic trick as Muse's "Knights of Cydonia" (Don't waste time or time will waste you) but if anything, cleverer and subtler. Huzzah!

"You do things I cannot see, the only fool around here is me. I see things you cannot do, the only fool around here is you."


   
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Dylan,

Good start :D I can hear something like Foo Fighter's D.O.A. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=O2_0Rx780Uk

It's definitely not a warm "fuzzy" style.....reads more like the Grim Reaper.....cold...matter of fact.....like it or not....this is me......TIME.....

.....the music you chose will be key to interpretation and mood of the song.

James


   
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