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Year 6 Week 18 - Promises and Lies = with MP3

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(@chefie)
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Hi all,

Thought I'd try to simplify a bit this week . . . . . .

http://www.soundclick.com/neilstuart

PROMISES AND LIES

did you believe your promises to be real
or did they simply give you a chance to steal
a dream I thought we might share
did you ever care

What's the difference between your promises and lies
a person I could love
or a person I could despise

and you lied and you lied and you lied and you lied and you lied
and you lied and you lied and you lied and you lied and you lied

did you talk just to listen to yourself
did it matter, did it help
that I believed in every word
in every word

What's the difference between your promises and lies
a person I could love
or a person I could despise

and you lied and you lied and you lied and you lied and you lied
and you lied and you lied and you lied and you lied and you lied

What's the difference between your promises and lies
a person I could love
or a person I could despise

and you lied and you lied and you lied and you lied and you lied
and you lied and you lied and you lied and you lied and you lied


   
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(@vic-lewis-vl)
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Hmmm - as you say, Neil, a little stripped down this week. Personally, I think it suits the song - with the rather sparse guitar backing, the vocals come across as careworn, world-weary and jaded - just right for the mood!

It's a little unlike you to have only a couple of verses - you're usually not short of a phrase or several! But again, I think the repetition works well - there's just an atmosphere about the whole song that works well.

:D :D :D

Vic

"Sometimes the beauty of music can help us all find strength to deal with all the curves life can throw us." (D. Hodge.)


   
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