I like this part:When the wind falls silentThe stars are just shards of glassScattered upon a ceiling blackened with sootThey are frauds like the moon...

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Neil,I still pretty new here so this is the first time I'm looking at your music.I like your melody and lyrics but I think you could ought to consider...

David,This song reached right through my chest and gave my heart a squeeze - wow! I tend to like songs without a bridge or chorus because the listen...

NIce one! I think you can do a lot with this one - it could be a good acoustic rock, metal, or blues tune. If it was mine, the groove would be chann...

Paul, Kathy, dhodge,Thanks so much for your ideas! I ended up taking Paul's advice and here is how is turned out:I may rework it again later by workin...

Kat and Dhodge,Thanks so much for your thoughts! I was going to fiddle with the melody tonight but your suggestions are so good, I'll give them a go....

Paul,I really like the pure dignity of these lyrics, especially knowing the narrative behind them.I also like how open it is to interpretation such as...

I would practice switching between Bm and D (need it for lots of Coldplay songs) , between G and Bm, for many songs, including With or Without Your, m...

Both pitch blending and pitch correction are features on Adobe Audition (what I use) but I have yet to figure out how to use them.

Hi Chris,my preference would be not to resolve anything. Also I don't think it reads too peachy at all. What I do like about it is this chorus, What...

Thanks for the inputs! I've been looking around and these suggestions have been helpful.