Many thanks! Your advice made a big difference.:) :) :)

I like that you opened yourself up and poured your feelings/influences out into this song. The best way (IMHO) to finish it is to channel that same g...

While I've only participated sporadically these past few months (too much time on the road, etc), I am humbled by the outpouring of good will and sens...

I just love this chorus, I can see the audience naturally joining in when you sing this live. Oh don't you think that I've done time?Everybody's fish...

Great feedback everyone! I am humbled by your generosity. The chorus resonated best (to me) as:So hold - Me soI don't get pulled - down belowHere...

Thanks Vic, I've been wrestling with that chorus myself and left it as-is until I find something which fits and flows. In the meantime, I worked out ...

I really like the imagery and flow of this one. My only suggestion/question is on the phrasing of the opening lines - some of those syllables look to...

What a thought-provoking start...very Chapinesque (Harry, not Mary). Where does it go next?

Vic,Great sketch! Lots of musical space in there for some harmony, fills, etc. I'm thinking it might need a bridge after the third verse - maybe bri...

Thanks Ken,I'm sorry if this dredged up some bad memories for you. I seem to be writing lots of stuff like that lately - that's the stuff that seems ...

here, here! I love this groove and can't wait to see it further developed. Did your girl leave you out?Well, its no time to poutWe've got em thin an...

Ken,Let me think on this one and see what we can noodle out...All the best,Chris