are there any other careers in music besides band, producer, composer, teacher? There certainly is! :) Music degrees can lead into any of the areas y...

wow. lol that was amazing! A little on the short side.. it seems to trail off a little, maybe add a bridge or an ending verse?Why I do, What I do, Whe...

Indeed, I see great potential in this! If you picture an image for each line , it has an amazing flow to it... you can 'see' this person wanting a cha...

thankyou scratch and XXXX for your replies :) scratch.. I do agree that it is a little on the complex side, as I was writing it just seemed to flow th...

Has anyone ever heard any songs by Jason Mraz? He's a crazy guy but an incredible songwriter, his music is a mixture of acoustic/folk and jazz. He's a...

how about 'forgotten love' or 'internal plight' ? or any of your possibilites... they all fit the song well :) j

firstly welcome to guitarnoise! :D wow is this really your first song? the wording and imagery is fantastic... and it looks like the words would be 'o...

thanks bonzai_man.. that was the message I was intending to send.j

And should your coarse sand be burned or your oil blood be drained know that i, your student learned only wished for peacefull days. love this verse.....

hey spadge.. luv the song! It just made me smile the whole way through.... not enough songs are about happy things!! :D loland if more people wrote ...

I love how the whole thing links together so well! The way you begin the versus with 'Looking back on yesterday..' and that flows to the main idea of ...

Thanks Nick! :D My songs are usually open to interepretation but generally, life fading away from people, and with it the things that are most import...

I'd have to say a great lyricist out there is Tim Rice. As songwriting goes... I'd have to say Phil Collins, Delta and Elton John.Other times it's har...