I have one word for that: unforgettable. A beautifully written song. :) Jacqui

hey rocketgirl, this is a beautiful song.. I agree with Rush, you do have talent, the lyrics flow together really nicely, and they give a sense of tru...

wow, this is great. I love the poetic style.. and some great lines aswell.The weight of the world, Is a burden we cannot bear A fate we unfurl a conse...

sry bout the pic... whatever it was it wasn't showing up on my comp (has that little X thing), so I didn't realise it was showing for others, and that...

for me, songs produced from Disney records have always been the most meaningful. Hey, it might just be my age, but at the same time I believe they are...

Blaine, usually there are at least three notes that can sound quite nicely with a particular chord. Simply work out what chord your playing, and take ...

perfect. :)

Hey christiaan, cool song! Just out of curiosity, did you write the music before the lyrics?The guitar backing is well composed and catchy. The cool t...

I like the way these lyrics don't have set rhymes or metres, but I can still see this making a top song. It's something about the wording, everthing i...

there is no compromise for pure emotion in a song, and I congratulate you in capturing that. Guitargeek, don't take any comments too personal, for the...

hey Mezlay, like the song!The lyrics and the imagery are good theres just something about the flow that seems to not be quite right. Don't get me wron...

The unending search.. I like it.How about 'found and lost' or maybe something abstract like 'shades of grey'shades of grey could represent the search ...

Hi theJackal.. great song, really catchy.The guitar fits really well with your lyrics and melody. The three note arppegio that leads into your rhythm ...

Hi Joyce, and welcome to the forums :) From your arrangement I get a real sense of a story being told from an onlooker, which is pretty much what the ...

Hey great song, from the heart.Afew suggestions.That dream I have always been dreaming Has finally come true That dream I have always believed in I ha...