I try reloading the song. Hopefully it's working now.

Hi Neil, Good start :D I like the concept in the chorus; both the lyrics and melody. I especially like that the chorus sounds good both slow and fas...

Thanks for the listen and feedback, David :D

Hi Paul, Thanks for the suggestion :D***POOF*** Changes made :mrgreen: -James

Hi Paul, Yes, it definitely sounds like you've been busy :shock: I like the overall feel of the song and the idea of two people together with diffe...

***POOF*** change made :mrgreen: I went for less is more...."I woulda coulda shoulda‏ but didn’t"

My only quibble is with the second line of the chorus: Thanks for the listen and feedback. I'll play around with it.I'll try your idea first.2 othe...

Hi GrungeSunset, I'd suggest is more contrast between the verses and the chorus. Great observation! I used the same chord progression for both vs and...

***POOF****changes made :mrgreen: ....more voices in the head and the end of the song blank space cut down to a normal fade.