Howdy coleclark. A good song, but the syllable count and meter is wild.Song as written:Successfully FailingI know that you won't ever be by my side =1...

Howdy SGinCYQX. This is an interesting tribute songI thought that race had been cancelled because of terroristic threats,but it might have been the ca...

You're quite welcome.As I readily acknowledge, only you, the writer/songerreally knows how the song should be.I had fun with the chopping/cutting anyw...

Howdy coleclark. here's my $-.02 input:Here, the tenses are inconsistent:If you're cut then I'll bleed (future tense)When you're sad I'm crying (prese...

If you wanted to standardize the verse lengths,here's the original and a suggested version.Sleep Darling (Everything's Going to Be Fine)Sleep my darli...

Howdy leear. This rendition may be too structured,but the matched syllable count should makewriting the music easier.Too Good To Be TrueI lie awake at...

OK and thanks. Take yer time on the other song,but know that several folks are looking forward to hearing it.Hope it becomes a success for you...........

Well now saddlepals, I am truly in awe.Sounds like a shootout at the OK Corralbetween the DownUnder Wunder and the USA Kid.So, post yer MP3's and let ...

Not at all. I am pleased that you or anyone would perform any of my lyrics.You may play it, market it, make money off it or just have fun with it.If m...

Howdy coleclark."Now, the day you left and rocked the boatDreams disappeared on the winds of tradeAnd the saddest song I ever wroteIs the one the juke...