Agreed. Very good.This excercise in bringing the best out thats for sure.

First one is good.Second one is excellent!

Welcome to the group.Hey, if you want to fix those annoying ’sin your text just select "modify" on your original postand you can fix the text ba...

Very well done. Alpaca, you review was pretty darn good too.

Of course...I like it.

When I used the word "finished", my intention waslike the "finish" on a piece of furniture or a fine car.Good stuff, just needed a little polishing. :...

What they said and more. Very good Olav.

Just for clarity, I meant the Leroy Brown reference in the complimentary sense.

I liked the redo!

I liked the second one best.For the first one, I thought the end could use somehelp...and here is my suggestion. Â Forgive me if its no better than yo...

Neither seems finished but you have thehardest part done....the idea and the general layout.Just need to rework the lines a little to get themmore in ...

Good idea Gina.I agree about the last line switcheroo advice.

These are really good Silly.Bob was right on the second one...It read fine for me the first time, but if I was singing it I would probably end up doin...

I liked the addicted one. You did a good job with a hard one.Starting last ..started fine, but then seemed to bea bit forced. Sometimes the best idea...

I like Bob's fix too, but I think it works even betterif we put it back in the blender....This does more for me:Drinkin' in the dark alone. Not much l...