I only post when I am not playing guitar....and I have something constructive to say....and when I see something exceptional.Or in this case, when I j...

You did an excellent job with a very difficult assignment.

Thanks Bob for the suggestion. I made the change.I took your advice but added a modest grammer violation (artist license)to get the syllable count in ...

Your song has a great feel to it. Need maybe another verse and to just tie the verses together a little bit better.

Awl writey than.

I will bet she wore a ton of makeup too. Just a guess.

This weeks assignment really worked for you. Â Except for a few minor meter problems , this is excellent. Â By coincidence I saw this painting for th...

"no one to got to"should beno one to go to

I like it. Only one slight spelling mistake...I will let you find it.

Crimson Tears was one of my submitted titles, andI am impressed with the words that have formed around it. Great stuff Inkpen and Maxwell. Maybe the...

Guitar NoiseString Thing Theory.

Yep...good storytelling. I thought some of the lines were a bit longer thanthe really need to be. And some of the phases are inverted a bit. i.e. "...

Good stuff up til the end. Â I'd recommend dropping all that baby s**t at the end into a diaper. :)