Finally, back in the world of cyber-space.
I feel both entries have a Country feel to them. Ill see how it goes next week. I have a funny feeling what next weeks assignment is going to be.
Blessings. Olav
Rings on the bedside table Â
Once there was fire
in every breath,
passion in every heartbeat.
Then the colors of life
turned an icy shade
Cold, as the rings
on the bedside table
I'll Show You
Heartache and pain,
your lifes companion
Dreams of love,
weakens your breath
You ask me if
my love will be true.
It will. Â - Â Ill show you.
Heart-ace = heart-ache?
They both seem to connect to eachother. I'll show you then becomes really frightening! Like when you remembered how much you loved someone, but you don't remember why. Now the colours of love is cold, but then, then I was going to show her how to love!
Yep. It was supposed to be heartache
Tnx. Olav
I really like Rings on the bedside table and the visuals it brought, and I like what you did with I'll Show you as well. (That one was mine ;D) It really makes me want to read on and how "I'll show you".
Good work
Laura
What they said and more. Very good Olav.
Olav, both really good, especially liked, rings on the bedside table, a very clever idea :)
currently number 60 in total posts... and shooting for number 1!!
I have a funny feeling what next weeks assignment is going to be.
Blessings.
Have you been reading over my shoulder? ;D
I agree with all the posts above Rings on the bedside table is well done. I'll Show You hints at deep dark menace.
Good Stuff
Bob  :)
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