Deep… John. Very deep. I especially liked how you rhymed Bible and Survival in verse two. I give you an A+ for that one, very clever. Other than tha...
This is quite a production Joe, quite impressive. I enjoyed it a lot. Lots of good imagery, lots of nice sounds, may be borderline on the long side, b...
Lot of good use of imagery D.R……..You gotta stay off the coffee at night!!!!! ;) Dough has a good point. I was thinking terrorist also in the beg...
Great song, I love the progression from child to adult, although it did not say an adult that's how I read into it. Others may see it differently. Cho...
PeteThe daddy/father switch I think went well with the progression"But this year I made a promise That I wouldn't shed a tear Not one" You may be able...
StrayCatExept from the repeated use ot the word"beautiful"....this is ...quite (may I say)....beautiful"A half-hearted postcard from days long past A...
Nice stuff Neil. Surprising take on the assignment......(good that is!!!)I totally agree with the bridge comments stated. I think the lyrics of verse ...
AliensGotta say, the groove got me going. Although I'm not into any space stuff, I found this song intriguing. I don't particularly care for the suite...
BarnaBusI really liked the hourglass image you used, and I would like to see that more throughout the lyrics. I did not care for the eyeglass analogy,...
Good stuff Neil. I especially liked how you deviated a little at the end. The repeat of the last two lines could even go on for one or two more times ...
SarahI really like this. I think it has a great Country feel to it. I would like to see a chorus to tie it together. ….a little chorus…a little fi...
DavidI like the story(ies) here but I find it hard to really connect them even if “dad explained there are lots of things you'll never have.Let me s...
Vic. I like it. Short and sweet and to the pointI am wondering If I'd like to see just one person (the thief) in line 1 verse 3.I know it ties nicely ...
Welcome DaveGreat Song. I'll just tag on to the other commentsGood to have you onboardBlessingsOlav
BarnabusIt works very well talking most of it through instead of singing this piece, however I don't think you have anything to be ashamed of when it ...