Thanks James!I didn't think of a convict... I like that. I usually start with a line and just kinda add to it until it starts to make some kind of se...

Hey James,First off, it's nice to hear a different style of music! As for the song, when I read the lyrics i didn't get the rhythm, but when I heard ...

Nice work Dylan. In my head it actually sound more like an old country song. Something like Hank Williams' Jambalaya. Thanks for posting man!

Thanks Shady,I usually do write choruses into songs. I kinda meant the "where were you" melody to come across as the chorus. I think the brevity of ...