"picture this" and "All I Can't Say" are my favorite off of this list.:) Portia

"everyone else moves forward" could definately make a good song.I also like "face to the sun, shadows behind you":) Portia

"A Stillborn Epiphany" - now that's a song I'd like to hear:) Portia

Good job! I was very impressed by how naturally you fit in the assigned phrases. I especially love the chorus. Only one line stuck out to me - "In ...

It's always interesting to see how different people interpret my songs. I very rarely explain what I'm thinking when I write my songs because I prefe...

Wow, I love this! Good job.:) Portia

This is good. I like it - and the music works well, too. I definately think you did the right thing changing those lines in the chorus - it works mu...

It's nice. Very sweet. It's a little short, and the first verse struck me as slightly cliche, but I like it anyway.:) Portia

Ok, there is now a rough mp3 of this one up at my website. It is tentatively titled "Temptation". To hear it, go to scroll down to the "Guitarnoise...

Thanks for the comments everyone. Vic - I actually wrote music first on this one and it's fairly easy to play, so I'm planning on trying to record it ...

I like it. I'm ashamed to say I think my husband could have written it about me :oops: Thankfully, he's not musically inclined :) You may want to ...

I like this. It's a nice take on the assignment. I agree with scratchmonkey on the chorus - it tripped me up quite a bit as well.Nice work:) Portia