You'll get there CT. Anyone can rhyme, the key, as you said is to find the word that means the right thing "and" rhymes. So, what you should look for ...

Here ya go Spadge. This site has most Aussie music out there. I live in the States now but originally from OZ. I discovered this one when I was lookin...

I like this one a lot Dilly. The rhyme scheme works well and the rhythm is pretty solid too. I think it definately lacks a chorus though and maybe eve...

What I see here is that not one line rhymes with another. Now I am an absolute beginner at this stuff but what I look for is at least some rhyming. I ...

Haha,Thanks for the kind comments Bob. I guess that is part of what the song is about. How the unusual to some is so normal to others, so now my usual...

I've a good mind to steal that line and put it in a country song Dog. lol"my vcr still flashes midnight" :D TheJackal.

Thanks for the comments guys.I am thinking of trying to incorporate the "and the sign said turn here for garden drugs" into the chorus and take your s...

Its a little late to comment here but I wanted to add my thoughts on morpheus. Dont know if I am stating the obvious here and everyone else felt it to...

Hi Scratch,I have to agree with Vic. Great song. I especially dig the "two dimensions ..... deeper than most"lines. Very clever. So short and simple a...

Dont know about profound but this set always made me think what a word smith this guy really is.L is for love baby andO is for only you that I doV is...

I agree with the problem of trying to keep things breif Vic.What I am taking from this assignment though is to try and be breif more often. It does te...

Thanks Celt.Sorry to hear about the pc though. lol I hope it survived. As soon as I have spurt of inspiration, the pc is the place I head. TheJackal.

ThanksI hear what your saying there but I am not sure how to make the connection on this one. This is actually what I saw on the way to work the other...

Thanks Blue and Rob for your comments.I think you are both right. Too cliche-ish(think ill use that word in my next song) and all to short. I was tryi...

Hi Blue,Cheap Wine is also and old Cold Chisel song. But, when I read your subject I initially thought you had one song titled -- Cheap Wine and Vomit...