Thanks for feedback Celt.You are right about the desert part. The point I am making with the lake is that it does not flow anywhere and anything I tak...

G=D D.U.D D.U.D D.U F=U.D.U C=D D.U.D D.U.D D.U F=U.D.U G= you are now back at the beginning.Hope this helps you man.TheJackal

Thanks all for the comments and feedback.TheJackal.

I agree with Vic.Reads will well and paints a good picture too. I see that there are 3 verses but it seems so damn short. Just feel like there should ...

Thanks Vic. hahaIm not saying my song writing is my strong point but my coming up with a title is definitely a weak point. Now this is going to sound ...

Thanks for the suggestions Vic.Here is a revised version.Slave to BeautyI wish I wish I wish I didn't have this god damned stutter And I wish I wish I...

Hi Blue,All of the lyrics in both of these are great. But, there is a lot of material. I am not even sure how to work each one into just one song. It ...

Thanks N.Yeah it could us some work. Truth be told, I do a lot of my writing at work so I dont sit to long to ponder a change. I just write and write ...

I just posted as you put your last post out there Vic. Thanks again.By the way, CT was wondered about the wish in the third verse. It is more about me...

Thanks Vic,MLK was the man who sparked the thought. But I am more of a fringe thought kind of guy. I get the general ideal of a lot of stuff but I cou...

Maybe you could just name it Emily.Kind of cool that the title does not show up in the song at all.TheJackal.