I wasn't looking for "lust". So I'll probably change that to, "I cant control this heavy breathing". And the chorus is a little long on purpose. Th...

^yeah, thats what I ment for the third verse, sorry 'bout that....But thanx all!

ok cool, I was kinda' thinking of that but I might not change it because the 1st verse is suposta' be kinda' slow and then it gets fast on the 2nd and...

^wow, I must be really bad at this! .....oh well.......

Thats pretty good, it looks like a song by Fall Out Boy or Blink 182.all in all.....good job!

oh, wow....shoot.... :lol: ok, thanks!

could you guys give me links?

Thats EXACTLY what I'm gonna' do, and I was considering the LP-100......but what about this SG??If anyone knows if this is any good let me know and th...